Jay Dee Archer’s Reviews > Gunship > Status Update
Jay Dee Archer
is 13% done
Reading dialogue is difficult. Improper punctuation and several lines of dialogue by more than one person in a single paragraph. Line breaks would be appreciated.
— Nov 05, 2012 05:18AM
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Jay Dee Archer
is 87% done
Plenty of action, but the story isn't very detailed.
— Nov 18, 2012 01:48AM
Jay Dee Archer
is 37% done
I'm able to get past the punctuation, style and formatting problems. Seems like testosterone filled characters again.
— Nov 13, 2012 05:06AM
