David’s Reviews > ZombieDead > Status Update

Wow. This is really, really bad. Even if you ignore the paper thin plot and the annoyingly vapid characters, I have never read a published work that contains this many grammatical errors. If it was self-published, I can understand he may not have had an editor, but could he not have reread his own book? The number of run-on sentences is appalling!

"Adam may be yellower than a wagon full of dead chinks." "He was getting as queer as those two useless fucks." Lovely imagery. I'm really hoping the writing is only like this in the prologue (which is told from the POV of a delinquent youth) and the whole novel isn't written like this because...yuck.