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P. Kirby
is 75% done
This is like a long exercise in purple-prose and metaphor. Interminable.
— Oct 31, 2018 10:43AM
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P. Kirby
is 74% done
I have no fucking idea what "Antwerp Blue" is. The color synesthesia thing is getting old.
— Oct 31, 2018 10:42AM

P. Kirby
is 63% done
At least Leigh isn't acting like a nasty little shit toward Feng anymore. The girl/rivalry/whatever it was hate was getting older than Methuselah.
— Oct 30, 2018 12:15PM

P. Kirby
is 42% done
"Years from now you'll look back on this and what'll you have? Just...a bunch of these pictures. You probably won't even want them anymore. It's like my old Coffee Grind recordings in the back of the office closes--who the hell wants to listen to a bunch of derivative crap..."
It's official. Leigh's dad is a sack-of-shit. Even if he "redeems" himself later...he'll still be a steaming pile.
— Oct 29, 2018 10:39AM
It's official. Leigh's dad is a sack-of-shit. Even if he "redeems" himself later...he'll still be a steaming pile.

P. Kirby
is 30% done
Nice writing and occasionally, emotionally powerful moments. But I've been reading forever, and not much has happened except for Leigh constantly obsessing on her mother: "My mother is a a bird. A bird. A bird." Also, yet another YA novel driven by horrible parenting.
— Oct 27, 2018 11:26AM