Abbie Strizzi’s Reviews > The Lovely Bones > Status Update

The protagonist in my story would be, Susie. The antagonist would be, Mr. Hartfield. The relationship between them is, the were both known to be very kind, until of course they find out he has been killing girls. They were both quiet in public, and thy kept to them selves a lot.

The author uses characterzation by telling us exactly what happens through Susie's day. Like, what she wears, where she goes, what time she comes home and how her family treats her. This explains exactly what the character likes, and how she is treated.

The point of view in my book, is coming from Susie, the girl that was killed. She says how she sees things down back on Earth, and how her family struggles. But say it was from her sisters point of view, it would say how her life in school is and how she is struggling. Although Susie did say a lot aboput her sister and how she struggles at school, because everyone brings up "her dead sister". From anyone elses point

An incident in my book, is Mr. Hartfield invited Susie's dad to his house, and ask to help build something. So, he did and he started to get very suspicious about Mr. Hartfield. Because everyone says he is so innocent, when really he isn't, and Susie's dad is the first to see that.

My favorite part of the book I am reading is the suspense. In my book they think the man that is the killer is totally innocent. He always just goes on with his day, so unexpected. This book just makes you want to keep reading and see what is going to happen. I cant wait to get to the end.

The mood in this story is creepy, this story is creepy because she gets kidnapped and killed. This has a feeling of suspense because in this book, you didn't know what was going to happen when Susie and Mr. Harvey met in the cornfield, because he seemed so nice but also creepy.Susie kept having flashbacks of what has happened before she was killed, when she was being killed and when she was in heaven.