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Promising start, getting more disappointed. Great concept marred by sloppy, lazy, repetitive writing and silly inconsistencies. 1. If seraphim are immortal gods, why do they have sex and reproduce like humans with 9-month pregnancies?? 2. why does the author talk about their "humanity" when they're not even human! 3. If I have to read "a smile stretched thinly across his lips" one more time I'm going to scream.
Sep 28, 2018 03:53AM
Flame of Requiem: The Complete Trilogy (World of Requiem)

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