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when the bullet hit Jack, it punctured a lung, which is why it didn't hurt that bad at first. Jack died after Rabbit did the "surgery" on him because f the gangrene infection and just the fact that she had to pull it out with her fingers as a last resort. In the end, Johnnie was the big gross person that the police had shot down ten years later, because after Jack died he couldn't handle it and let himself go.
— Sep 13, 2018 08:42PM
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Carmen Castille
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The men that were asking Fletcher all of the questions knew that Fletcher was lying and so they electric shocked him, which gave him a seizure and that's how Fletcher's friend died, not by a gun. SO after that, Fletcher confessed to everything and just told them the truth about how El Condor planned on attacking the city and taking the drugs they were looking for.
— Sep 26, 2018 06:47AM
Carmen Castille
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I started a new short story and so far a reporter named Fletcher was covering a story about a gang in mexico and because of that, the gang actually kidnapped him and pans on sending him back to America. The thing is, Fletcher had a friend who was also a reporter covering the story and they killed him and showed Fletcher pictures of it, but I don't understand why they would kill his friend and not Fletcher?
— Sep 23, 2018 08:59PM
Carmen Castille
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I started a new short story today and it is a pretty strange one. So it was about these three men who were running away from the police after robbing a bank and one of the men named Jack was shot and they all had to go to a motel so that they could see what was wrong with him and they waited so long that he developed gangrene and the was that Stephen King described it was absolutely disgusting.
— Sep 11, 2018 07:31PM
Carmen Castille
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I started a new short story, but my last one was called autopsy room 4, and its about this man who was bitten by a snake and was paralized by the venom, and the people who were doing the autopsy were new and young so they really didnt know what they were doing, and they started to check his body for any clues about the venom or how he died and right before they cut himopen, a man came in and told him that he was aliv
— Sep 10, 2018 07:50AM
Carmen Castille
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My Response- I started a new short story today, and this was by far the scariest one I've read. so this little boy goes fishing and his mom tells him not to go past where the lake bends, and of course he does. so he's fishing and this man in a suit comes up to him and almost instantly he knows that this man in the black suit is the devil. The man in the suit tries to convince him that his mother is dead.
— Sep 04, 2018 08:02AM
