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Mercy Dragonslayer
is on page 138 of 395
One more thing, before I forget: I've seen "franticly" put down twice in this book, amid other mispellings and typos. No matter whether you use American or British spellings overall, "franticly" doesn't exist. "Frantically" does.
— Oct 05, 2012 02:47PM
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Mercy Dragonslayer
is 99% done
Okay, I've buckled down and finished this without any more updates, and I've let it stew for a few hours, so I'm ready to send up my promised review.
— Oct 08, 2012 09:51AM
Mercy Dragonslayer
is on page 183 of 395
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I am on page 183, and Chapter 21 was very well done. Karah and her crew have reached their awakening.
— Oct 05, 2012 08:10PM
I am on page 183, and Chapter 21 was very well done. Karah and her crew have reached their awakening.
Mercy Dragonslayer
is on page 138 of 395
Okay, I declined to comment when she found out she was a dragon, because the title screams it. But...
"chaos ruled the skies"? Really, Karah? What does that mean you saw? Flags with CHAOS written on them tangling up airplanes?
Sorry. Book's still enjoyable, but....
— Oct 05, 2012 02:46PM
"chaos ruled the skies"? Really, Karah? What does that mean you saw? Flags with CHAOS written on them tangling up airplanes?
Sorry. Book's still enjoyable, but....
Mercy Dragonslayer
is on page 74 of 395
Mmmm...definitely enjoying the book, but isn't Karah ever going to ask what her "true form" looks like?
— Oct 04, 2012 03:24PM
Mercy Dragonslayer
is on page 48 of 395
All right, so, I'm having very mixed feelings about this book. On the one hand, there is a staggering overabundance of typos, misplaced or misrepresented words, and tense-changes in midsentence. On the other hand, the plot is quite intriguing and I already like a number of the characters.
Well, we'll wait and see, won't we?
— Oct 04, 2012 09:08AM
Well, we'll wait and see, won't we?
