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SweetSweeede
is 6% done
Mixing tense makes it really hard to read - said (past tense) becomes says (present tense) without any clear indication why
— Aug 10, 2018 11:30PM
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SweetSweeede
is 40% done
I'm trying to feel sympathy for the POV character, but she's made it so hard to like her!
— Aug 11, 2018 06:54PM
SweetSweeede
is 7% done
The POV character is slut-shaming someone. I'm really not feeling any empathy towards her.
— Aug 10, 2018 11:35PM
