Steven Allen’s Reviews > The Last Shieldmaiden > Status Update
Steven Allen
is 65% done
About time the book has gotten better. We are into the action, had the first sex scene (tastefully done and not terribly graphic) which took a turn I did not see coming. The author did some great foreshadowing that I ignored, and took the story a direction that is a surprise. Desperately needs a better editor, as huge blocks of text, non-ending dialogue & poor formatting are a real deal breaker for a lot of readers.
— Jul 26, 2018 11:19AM
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Steven Allen
is 15% done
Ok slogging through the beginning of this book. Still confused with the repeated "felt-defence", not sure if it's hostile textiles or a term for something in the author's world.
— Jul 25, 2018 11:44AM
