Dawn Cavenee’s Reviews > Under Wraps > Status Update
Dawn Cavenee
is on page 152 of 330
2)Her back is pressed to his chest. She takes a step back and he steps up to fill the distance between them. *If he is pressed to her back, how can she step back? How is there any space between them?!? Page 134
3)She mentions she doesn’t need protecting because she lives with two vampires. *Now on page 151, he is surprised to hear she has a roommate and is living with someone.
— Jul 21, 2018 06:12PM
3)She mentions she doesn’t need protecting because she lives with two vampires. *Now on page 151, he is surprised to hear she has a roommate and is living with someone.
Like flag
Dawn’s Previous Updates
Dawn Cavenee
is on page 153 of 330
Really hope there are no further glaring mistakes within the next 100 pages otherwise I may not finish this book!! I own this book and already know I will NOT be keeping it!! Displeased!!
— Jul 21, 2018 06:12PM
Dawn Cavenee
is on page 151 of 330
So I’m hating the fact this author can’t keep details straight. 1)Sophie is home, looks thru peephole at Parker before opening the door. Page 103. Later in the book, she has to direct him to her apartment. *He has already been there; he should know how to get back. But yet he asks her if that is her building!! Page 138
— Jul 21, 2018 06:10PM
