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Simile: When Mr.Stull's skin looked like parchment paper.
Onomatopoeia: When Toby, Annabel, Calanthe, and Strobe was in a Ford truck (Strobe was driving) the hit the ruhk. The impact sound was BAMMMMM!!!
Metaphor: when Strobe grabbed his crossbow really fast because the book said that "In a lightning move, Strobe grabbed his crossbow, ..."
— Sep 21, 2012 03:08PM
Onomatopoeia: When Toby, Annabel, Calanthe, and Strobe was in a Ford truck (Strobe was driving) the hit the ruhk. The impact sound was BAMMMMM!!!
Metaphor: when Strobe grabbed his crossbow really fast because the book said that "In a lightning move, Strobe grabbed his crossbow, ..."
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Simile: When Mr.Stull's skin looked like parchment paper.
Onomatopoeia: When Toby, Annabel, Calanthe, and Strobe was in a Ford truck (Strobe was driving) the hit the ruhk. The impact sound was BAMMMMM!!!
Metaphor: when Strobe grabbed his crossbow really fast because the book said that "In a lightning move, Strobe grabbed his crossbow, ..."
— Sep 21, 2012 03:07PM
Onomatopoeia: When Toby, Annabel, Calanthe, and Strobe was in a Ford truck (Strobe was driving) the hit the ruhk. The impact sound was BAMMMMM!!!
Metaphor: when Strobe grabbed his crossbow really fast because the book said that "In a lightning move, Strobe grabbed his crossbow, ..."
Katherine Colon
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In part 2, chapter 3 Calanthe (a dekayi; a type of human/monster) was described as depleted. I understand from that colorful modifyer that she looked really exhausted. Also, Calanthe was able to pick up Toby as if he weighted no more than a few pounds. I could tell from that action verb that she was really strong.
— Sep 13, 2012 02:12PM

