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Elysian Fields
is 49% done
I am going to step away for a day or so. This book is just so long and detailed. I want to read and finish another book. I will come back to it. Stil good, just very long winded.
— Jul 11, 2018 08:20AM
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Elysian Fields
is on page 197 of 740
A lot of editing errors. When character narration changes there is no page break or notification; its just the next paragraph. I dislike how one character describes another that they know nothing about; or explains how another character is feeling.
— Jul 09, 2018 02:44PM
Elysian Fields
is on page 45 of 740
It sort of hasva poetic rhythm to it. It is way over descriptive, but in this soft flowing way. Nothing much has happened, but it is good.
— Jul 04, 2018 08:26PM
