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This novel is told and explained, instead of putting audiences inside it. I think it is partly to do with dialogue being scarce, which would play scenes instead of having the protagonist narrate all of them. The writing rule I learned as a child, in person from local star, Martha Brooks, yells out here: "Show, don't tell". But setting up a new series takes explaining and I am certainly giving this novel a chance.
Jul 10, 2018 09:06AM
Murder Will Travel (Booked for Travel Mysteries #1)

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I would say this is like watching grass go but any prairie person knows that expression has to go. Grass grows with surprising speed. Ask gardeners anywhere.

What also keeps surprising me is authors missing the structure of the genres they chose for their novels. This should be a mystery, with a vineyard and tour group decorating the background. Plopping down a crime doesn't guarantee novels read like mysteries.
Jul 15, 2018 08:56AM
Murder Will Travel (Booked for Travel Mysteries #1)


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