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Extinction (Quasar)
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Finally read a chapter that made a looot of sense and it seems we are done stalling and are back on track with the main story loool. Yeah, I really have no idea how to feel about this prose exactly.xDDD Still am curious about the story tho, thus all these sidetrips and useless descriptions tend to annoy me just a bit, haha.xD
And Adam is finally in on the who is gonna die secret.
— Jul 07, 2018 12:55PM
And Adam is finally in on the who is gonna die secret.
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Extinction (Quasar)
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Okay, I like it lots better now that the plot has been moving. And is it just me or did the writing change a bit (for the better)?? Also, saw the twist with Blue's father coming for miles away.XDDD
— Jul 12, 2018 01:27PM
Extinction (Quasar)
is on page 168 of 389
Okay, chapter twenty, a.k.a the Ronan/Adam chapter, made me happy. More of dat please and thank you!!
— Jul 05, 2018 01:25PM
Extinction (Quasar)
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And did I mention I don't get the clusterfuck that are all of these bits and pieces of subplots?? 98% of the time I am just sitting and wondering why we are getting sidetracked so much from the main plot....what is the POINT to it all?? Yeah, idk... There is so much info provided that 90% of it is lost on me because of how unnecessary it is... Get to the point already! This is a faster story than it is being told.xD
— Jul 04, 2018 01:44PM
Extinction (Quasar)
is on page 155 of 389
I am not a nitpicky reader, but I find some prose here problematic and just a bit disgusting.
Examples include: "if you believe the Dutch, but who does."
"Your vote counts double because you are a Caucasian with great hair."
I get it.Maybe the author is being funny and just showing characterization, but I find this problematic none the less. It could easily be avoided. It throws me out of the story. Very unnecessary.
— Jul 04, 2018 01:29PM
Examples include: "if you believe the Dutch, but who does."
"Your vote counts double because you are a Caucasian with great hair."
I get it.Maybe the author is being funny and just showing characterization, but I find this problematic none the less. It could easily be avoided. It throws me out of the story. Very unnecessary.
Extinction (Quasar)
is on page 155 of 389
I am not a nitpicky reader, but I find some prose here problematic and just a bit disgusting.
Examples include: "if you believe the Dutch, but who does."
"Your vote counts double because you are a Caucasian with great hair."
I get it.Maybe the author is being funny and just showing characterization, but I find this problematic none the less. It could easily be avoided. It throws me out of the story. Very unnecessary.
— Jul 04, 2018 01:29PM
Examples include: "if you believe the Dutch, but who does."
"Your vote counts double because you are a Caucasian with great hair."
I get it.Maybe the author is being funny and just showing characterization, but I find this problematic none the less. It could easily be avoided. It throws me out of the story. Very unnecessary.
