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Steven Allen
is 39% done
As a freelance editor specialized in weapons and military matters, it is frustrating to discuss a weapons error made by the author in the first book only to have him consistently make the same weapons error in the second book. Writers don't have to take an editor's suggestions, but weapons errors are hard to get by even with suspension of reality and belief. Oh, well I tried.
— Jun 04, 2018 06:16AM
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Steven Allen
is 65% done
Well at least the author might have listened to me a little bit and added grenades to the arsenal of the good guys.
— Jun 04, 2018 02:26PM
Steven Allen
is 12% done
This book is longer than the previous, which considering how long we waited for it kinda nice since we waited so long for this second book. Still wish I could have edited this book, and perhaps caught some more of the mistakes that I see in the text.
— Jun 03, 2018 07:26PM
