Emily Protiva’s Reviews > The Game > Status Update

An important event from my book is when Trew first enters the game for his very last time. This is important because he is going for number one in the world, but if he messes up he could lose everything he has. This event is developing conflict, that could potentially ruin his retirement in the real life. I think that something bad will happen, such as him losing all his money in the game, and in the real world.

The tone of my book is uncertain, tense, hopeful and playful. On the outside of the game, the tone and mood is uncertain and tense, because they all want Zach to do well in the game. They also know if he messes up, he could ruin the rest of his entire real life. Inside the game, Zach is hopeful and playful, because he is unaware and doesn’t have any problems in the game. He doesn’t know how much pressure is in him.

In my book, The Game, Zach is the second most popular player, and he is going for number one. This will take risks, and he could end up losing all his money and fall in bankruptcy for his retirement. I predict that he will lose a lot of his money, but then make a comeback and become first in the world. I also predict that he will have an interactive life with Alysa, and they both will become very successful players.

I would tell Zach to play it safe, and stay number two ranked in the world and not go for one. I would also tell him that he could lose everything he has made in The Game, and that going for number one could jeopardize him in his retirement and his future life. If I were him, I would play it safe and go for number two in the world, rather than risk everything I have for being number one.

The structure of my book is consisting of flashbacks to reveal events that Zack doesn’t remember that already happened to him. He doesn’t remember because he died in “The Game” and is still recovering. He has to go back into the game, which is told in chronological order. It is also a bit of problem and solution, because he encounters problems in the game that he has to get out of in order to thrive and stay alive.