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Amber
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I mean, if you were still questioning if you could trust her, why would you tell her almost everything? Treating her as both a child and an adult at the same time is just...*sigh*
— May 17, 2018 09:21AM
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Amber
is on page 258 of 464
You didn't even try with the romance. Didn't. Even. Try.
— May 19, 2018 02:08PM
Amber
is on page 230 of 464
Please just make it stop. This is a whirlwind of bad writing and needless confusion.
— May 17, 2018 09:59AM
Amber
is on page 210 of 464
How would they even get away with that? It's not their house.
— May 17, 2018 09:32AM
Amber
is on page 195 of 464
*throws the metaphorical table* There had better be a really good explanation for this not being the first section told...did she forget that these are different timelines?
— May 15, 2018 07:47PM
Amber
is on page 194 of 464
She keeps using the phrase "her perspective shifts" and it's really jarring because all you need to do is say: she gazed elsewhere, or something else caught her eye. Perspective is very different than how it's being used here.
— May 15, 2018 07:34PM
