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William
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... but another rookie mistake: Changing viewpoint between Reacher and thugs every paragraph. Sucks the tension and pacing right out of it
— May 11, 2018 01:10AM
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William
is 21% done
... even the strong women in Child's books do a lot of blushing.
— May 11, 2018 03:53PM
William
is 5% done
... wow, the prose has improved a lot. More economical, better rhythm.
— May 10, 2018 01:47PM
