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Amber
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:/ just too much "rich" description. Get on with the story. I get it. The house is big and has lots of stuff. Move on.
— May 02, 2018 11:38AM
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Amber
is on page 258 of 464
You didn't even try with the romance. Didn't. Even. Try.
— May 19, 2018 02:08PM
Amber
is on page 230 of 464
Please just make it stop. This is a whirlwind of bad writing and needless confusion.
— May 17, 2018 09:59AM
Amber
is on page 210 of 464
How would they even get away with that? It's not their house.
— May 17, 2018 09:32AM
Amber
is on page 204 of 464
I mean, if you were still questioning if you could trust her, why would you tell her almost everything? Treating her as both a child and an adult at the same time is just...*sigh*
— May 17, 2018 09:21AM
Amber
is on page 195 of 464
*throws the metaphorical table* There had better be a really good explanation for this not being the first section told...did she forget that these are different timelines?
— May 15, 2018 07:47PM
