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Teal
is 7% done
Drooling on your Kindle is NOT advisable. However, sometimes it just can't be helped -- like while I was reading the sample for this. I practically injured myself rushing to buy it (at full price! by new-to-me authors!). What are the chances it can live up to my hopes? I will keep you updated...
— Apr 18, 2018 08:01PM
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Teal
is 70% done
She turnd to me then and one of her hands left Logan's to grip mine.
Who is this "me" of which you speak? Once again, this story written in the THIRD PERSON slips into FIRST PERSON.
This book is not ready for prime time. It's still at the draft stage where the authors should be paying people to read it, not vice versa.
— Apr 21, 2018 09:28PM
Who is this "me" of which you speak? Once again, this story written in the THIRD PERSON slips into FIRST PERSON.
This book is not ready for prime time. It's still at the draft stage where the authors should be paying people to read it, not vice versa.
Teal
is 33% done
"No idea. Follow me," I whispered.
An innocuous-seeming couple of sentences -- until you consider that up until now the story has been written in the THIRD PERSON.
If I had to describe the quality of the writing in a single word, that word would be: Slovenly. Or how about: Lazy. Slipshod? You get the idea.
— Apr 20, 2018 07:53PM
An innocuous-seeming couple of sentences -- until you consider that up until now the story has been written in the THIRD PERSON.
If I had to describe the quality of the writing in a single word, that word would be: Slovenly. Or how about: Lazy. Slipshod? You get the idea.
Teal
is 27% done
I don't like the MCs, the sex scenes made me squirm uncomfortably, and the authors' cluelessness about commas is a source of constant low-level irritation. But OTHER THAN THAT, everything is going JUST FINE. 😠
— Apr 19, 2018 11:32PM
