Jaylee’s Reviews > Daughter of Gods and Shadows > Status Update

I *really* want this book to be good. I hope it gets better alsdfasf. Right now it's a mess of .... juvenile writing mistakes, like not anchoring your char in their own desires and instead having them "follow instincts" and do things "they don't know why" and "it just drew me to it" nooooo.

Opening with a dream sequence and changing POV 3x in the first 15 pages is a bold move too