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Jane Lebak
Jane Lebak is 20% done
Chapter eight! The story finally started!
Apr 02, 2018 10:08AM
If I Run (If I Run, #1)

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Jane Lebak
Jane Lebak is 15% done
So....nothing has happened. I mean, stuff has *happened* but it all feels like backstory/filler until the real story starts, and it could have been summed up in a couple of lines in the real chapter one. "How did I get to {location?} Well, I'm kind of on the run for the murder of my friend. Which, for the record, I didn't commit."

Everyone else says it's tense. I'm kinda...not?
Apr 01, 2018 12:49PM
If I Run (If I Run, #1)


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