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So many glaring spelling and grammar errors. 😭

After that 1 appearance at the beginning, River is only mentioned almost halfway into the story. Proves my point that the “romance” part was not really necessary to move the story forward. I don’t feel any sort of empathy towards River and Athena.

Hallow =/= Hollow
There are still typos. I can’t.

That Noche Buena dinner turned disastrous but I couldn’t help but chuckle when the gang had to roll an unconscious Dorian in the carpet.