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Great long foreword about the cast of characters etc, etc, etc and how we would grow to love them, etc etc and that there was a list of the characters at the back of the book. Fine. Until I got to the end of chapter one, nicely immersed in the story, only to be jerked out by the bright blue link to the cast of characters at the end ! NOT a good way to keep your readers engaged.
— Mar 31, 2018 11:28PM
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