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Lucy Wightman
Lucy Wightman is 21% done
I wasn't sure I would make it through the first 20 pages. The descriptions and the narrator's inner dialogue reek of outdated and overused phrases. A little further in and obvious plot and foreshadows have me agreeing to grab the T bar up the slope. Accepting the limitations, the story becomes a decent read. Why are Christian and Anastasia both wearing Converse brand shoes in the first heated scene?
Aug 12, 2012 06:43AM
Fifty Shades of Grey (Fifty Shades, #1)

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Lucy Wightman
Lucy Wightman is 53% done
I stumble over the "inner goddess" among other poor writing choices, yet I continue reading for 2 reasons. I am curious about the why-now popularity, and its carnal entertainment value.
Sep 02, 2012 06:08AM
Fifty Shades of Grey (Fifty Shades, #1)


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