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Joke
is 35% done
sure could use some editing..the gym guy is called Kellan, Kellen, Kellan and Kellen again pp 79-81...
— Aug 02, 2012 01:44AM
Joke
is 35% done
like the story..SATC meets Nancy Drew in high school, lilttle remark: the author really like to use the expression : i bugged my eyes out..it is the ..th time used on p 77
— Aug 02, 2012 01:39AM
Joke
is 15% done
there some smaal inconsistencies f.e. p 35 it is mentioned that Val is wearing a pink minidress and glittery stiletto's but she changed her clothes on p23 into a one shoulder peacock dress and green Jimmy Choos after the cupcake incident...
— Aug 02, 2012 12:24AM
Joke
is 10% done
what strikes me tough is altough Alley likes Val. She seems to have some aversion for the rest of the girls, but besides bein very rich, they aren't that bad....
— Aug 02, 2012 12:06AM
Joke
is 10% done
introduction to high school life, the popular clique, the tall broady muscular new guy, the bitchy wannabees, but the protagonist is very likeable and so is her clumsy bff Val..
— Aug 01, 2012 11:57PM

