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Campbell Andrews is on page 61 of 288
*bzzt* in your novel set in 1962 “morphed” is entirely out of place. diction much?
Feb 07, 2018 07:34AM
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Let me get this straight.
Feb 08, 2018 09:27PM
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Campbell Andrews
Campbell Andrews is on page 94 of 288
so Spider-Man came out in the early 60s, amazing research
Feb 08, 2018 09:18PM
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Campbell Andrews
Campbell Andrews is on page 88 of 288
What would you call it when 2 good-ol boy cops in rural GA in 1962 decide to pursue a black man driving a convertible at night, assuming it’s stolen?

Racist, right? That’s a given.

It is also, according to Ms. Pittard, “a complete failure of imagination.”

??? because cops should imagine any possibility before they assume the worst? I don’t get it.

Sounds good, in consideration makes no sense. AKA MFA writing
Feb 08, 2018 06:23PM
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Campbell Andrews
Campbell Andrews is on page 74 of 288
shaggy dog stories are so late-20th
Feb 08, 2018 05:30PM
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Campbell Andrews
Campbell Andrews is on page 69 of 288
favorite passage yet, the boarders camaraderie. when she inhabits her characters without explaining them her writing is most tolerable
Feb 07, 2018 07:41AM
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Campbell Andrews
Campbell Andrews is on page 66 of 288
she’s good when her characters are talking to each other
Feb 07, 2018 07:37AM
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Campbell Andrews
Campbell Andrews is on page 54 of 288
The public display of grief and the turn of the scene are captured nicely
Feb 06, 2018 09:50PM
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Campbell Andrews
Campbell Andrews is on page 50 of 288
bwaahahahaha

“one was not born a woman but became one.”

(a transgender sleeper agent, in 1962?) who by the age of EIGHT knew no difference between her anatomy and her twin brother’s??

has Ms. Pittard ever known a child? was she ever one herself??
Feb 06, 2018 09:45PM
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Campbell Andrews
Campbell Andrews is on page 33 of 288
“Is too much a thing?”

I’m seeing this around a lot, the “is it a thing” colloquialism. It’s anachronistic from the mouth of anybody before this decade.

Careless.
Feb 04, 2018 09:50PM
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Campbell Andrews
Campbell Andrews is on page 20 of 288
Unsure how much is fiction and how much is reportage
Feb 02, 2018 10:29PM
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