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Bunny McFoo
Bunny McFoo is 58% done
Well that certainly happened sooner than expected - but yup. Dramatic fight, storming off, not listening. Check, check, check.
Jan 26, 2018 02:35AM
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Bunny McFoo
Bunny McFoo is 67% done
Holy shit, I'm the most pedantic bitch of all time but a crepe is not a pancake.

Also, there is no fucking way on earth that a doctor at Planned Parenthood would give a 28 year old the "are you sure you want to abort, it gets harder to have kids when you're older" speech. I mean, they'd never give anyone that speech but ESPECIALLY not a fucking 28 year old.
Jan 26, 2018 02:45AM
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Bunny McFoo
Bunny McFoo is 50% done
Aaaaand there's the not at all subtle thing that will create a massive misunderstanding between the love interests later in the novel, driving a wedge between them when she won't listen to his completely reasonable explanation why he has the Maltese Falcon.


(Man, it would be so much more fun if it literally were the Maltese Falcon)
Jan 26, 2018 02:29AM
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Bunny McFoo
Bunny McFoo is 46% done
This is cute so far but:

a) why the hell is this place doing brunch on a Saturday

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b) oh, wait, they're doing it on Saturday because THE RESTAURANT IS CLOSED ON SUNDAYS.

well, I just figured out why the restaurant in the book is failing. The owner is a moron who's skipping brunch on the day that might as well be called Brunchday so that they can close. On Sunday. For fuck's sake.
Jan 26, 2018 01:52AM
Reinventing Ruby


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