Elysian Fields’s Reviews > Sparrow > Status Update
Elysian Fields
is 11% done
I am a bit bored. There is a lot of description of the wedding. Not really sure how this plays into the story as a whole, but I want more action; to move the story line along.
— Jan 22, 2018 04:08PM
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Elysian Fields
is 78% done
Getting better, still not what I was expecting. Found a wonderful line: "He gave me lies, and for him, I closed my eyes." Not really satisfied with this story, but I will give thus author another try.
— Jan 22, 2018 09:41PM
Elysian Fields
is 48% done
This story is WAY different then I was expecting. I thought it was a hitman/fixer/Irish Mafia story with a romance. It is really a ememys to less enemys romance with a hint of the others. Leaning toward average at this time. Nothing really pulling me to fantastic.
— Jan 22, 2018 07:25PM
