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Every chapter so far has begun with the word ‘Connor’
. The writing is stilted and U.N.natural and for a successful businessman Connor doesn’t seem to have much backbone. Too many proper nouns instead of pronouns, too many ‘Connor’s on the pages ( I counted 5 on one page) Dnf . Life is too short.
— Jan 21, 2018 10:51PM
. The writing is stilted and U.N.natural and for a successful businessman Connor doesn’t seem to have much backbone. Too many proper nouns instead of pronouns, too many ‘Connor’s on the pages ( I counted 5 on one page) Dnf . Life is too short.
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