Lauryn April’s Reviews > Veiled > Status Update
Lauryn April
is 30% done
This is interesting and different. I'm not sure how much I like how the timeline jumps back and forth, but overall I like the story.
— Jan 13, 2018 10:19AM
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Lauryn April
is 45% done
I like that there's a strong friendship between the two main female characters. It seems to be becoming a really important part of the plot. But, the romantic relationship between the lead and her love interst feels like it needs more build up.
— Jan 15, 2018 09:11AM
