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Luke Burrage
is 90% done
What the fuck is this coda at the end? Seriously, what the fuck? Do I have to get to the end of it to make any more sense of the story that's already over, or is it just superfluous? It's utterly boring and annoying at the same time. And the narrator has exactly one dimension of emotional range, and this is at the teeth-grind-inducing end.
— Jun 28, 2012 08:46AM
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Luke Burrage
is 30% done
Narration has improved a bit, attribution in dialogue still annoying, but the story is really good fun. I'm sticking with it.
— Jun 27, 2012 03:18PM
Luke Burrage
is 3% done
I need to look up the narrator of this, because he is (almost) the worst I've ever listened to. Luke said.
— Jun 27, 2012 07:43AM
