Suze Fields’s Reviews > The Daemoniac > Status Update
Suze Fields
is 51% done
The writing is enjoyable, but at this point I'm not sure where the story is trying to go, or how it's going to be resolved.
— Nov 30, 2017 05:55AM
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Suze Fields
is 21% done
I must confess myself disturbed by the many parallels the author keeps making with Sherlock Holmes. One thing is to be inspired by the books and the Great Detective, and another is to pretend your story's world was the original inspiration behind it.
— Nov 23, 2017 01:48PM
Suze Fields
is 16% done
I'm liking this, though there are some parts and some hints that annoy me a tad. The off hand reference to famous figures irks me a little. Maybe because it reminds me of real life con artists, with their penchant for misleading victims with off hand mentions of people, to make them believe they are intimate with them. I just don't like it. Well, we shall see if this costs the book a star or not.
— Nov 23, 2017 11:51AM

