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is 60% done
Zero chemistry between the leads. Zero dramatic tension in the story. There's nothing to feel invested in, no stakes at risk. What's the point?
— Nov 19, 2017 02:19PM
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Teal
is 68% done
This book has a bad case of the BAPS. Big-Ass Paragraph Syndrome. Also somehow the author has found a way to drain every scene of all dramatic tension. Every scene! And the MCs have zero chemistry. There is simply nothing here to care about. An interesting premise bites the dust...
— Nov 20, 2017 05:32PM
