Jenn Flynn-Shon’s Reviews > The Life Below > Status Update

Solid effort for a first time author. It's a unique concept & a sweet story. I had pangs for the life Cordelia lived. Things that Jones-Kipp could work on in the future: spelling/edits, character development (establish distinct voices), & trusting her reader (often, dialogue following narrative said the exact same words, dialogue shouldn't repeat info a reader already knows.)