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Benjamin is on page 87 of 386
It's hard to take this book seriously when the author doesn't know the difference between "insure" and "ensure;" "lightning" and "lightening;" and "shown" and "shone." These homophones make a huge difference in the context.
Oct 04, 2017 11:25AM
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Benjamin is on page 10 of 386
Ugh.
Already on the first page of the first chapter and the page number's in the margin, the scene breaks use inconsistent amounts of asterisks, and the page isn't justify aligned.
This is why I hate self-published authors.
Hopefully the story is good enough to overcome these distracting formatting errors.
Sep 29, 2017 01:47PM
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