Brooke’s Reviews > Echo of an Earth Angel > Status Update

Still chugging away...the paragraphs in this book are WAY too long!

I'm having a really hard time with this one. Talk about LONG paragraphs of narrative! Even the conversations the characters are having are paragraphs long. WTH?

Thank goodness this has picked up a bit!

This story is just not flowing for me. SOOOO much narrative. I'm bored....

Ho hum...I hope this gets better soon. So much narrative!

It's a little slow...but I like it so far!