Jaime’s Reviews > Jane, Unlimited > Status Update
Jaime
is on page 340 of 464
okay so this was better and I was starting to enjoy it & feel invested but the last chapter/universe I read (the one about someone losing a soul) was just so weird and now i'm on the "jane unlimited" chapter & it's confusing and just... yeah, not feeling. :(
— Sep 25, 2017 11:41AM
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Jaime
is on page 391 of 464
Okay so now I'm enjoying this again?!?! like what the heck man, I don't understand you book. You confuse me.
— Sep 25, 2017 08:18PM
Jaime
is on page 271 of 464
Okay this is so much better. I’m enjoying it and all the pieces coming together. I think I’ve gotten used to the narrative voice and now I’m invested in what is happening.
— Sep 23, 2017 08:59PM
Jaime
is on page 171 of 464
This is getting better. At least the first "story arc" was interesting. I still don't like the writing style.
— Sep 23, 2017 11:25AM
Jaime
is on page 100 of 464
Well, I've started the first "decision" option... and I'm still not impressed.
— Sep 22, 2017 04:01PM
Jaime
is on page 50 of 464
I'm not sure how I feel about this... nothing seems to be happening and my eyes keep glazing over because the conversations (and narration style?) are boring...
— Sep 21, 2017 08:00PM
