Laura’s Reviews > The Charlestown Connection: A Dermot Sparhawk Thriller (1) > Status Update
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Oh my god this is the most cliched Boston crime plot twist ever 😑
— Aug 30, 2017 09:07PM
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I'm 175 pages in and I thought the main character was like 40 until just now. He's apparently 23ish. Probably not great writing if your young adult character comes off as nearly middle aged...
— Aug 30, 2017 09:02PM

