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Now that I read the correct volume that is third, I might as well reprise the fourth! Regrettably despite finishing "All That Remains", I still feel quite a personal chunk was left out. Ought we not have been along for a scene of Kay moving house and what happened to Mark!? It is uninformatively blurted out here that he died by a fluke! I am incredulous that volume 3 didn't cover such a major circumstance either.
— Aug 14, 2017 02:52PM
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I love Lucy rejoining the cast! Patricia needed to lay off such garish emphasis on Kay's low computer knowledge; especially since all she had to do was type what Lucy directed. Dialogue repeating "slow down" was annoying. Perhaps pretending comes off poorly from Patricia, who was a computer analyst. So much minute detail but personal things like Mark's death skimmed! I am however, enjoying this story very much.
— Aug 15, 2017 09:13AM
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Stop talking about coffee! Who the fuck brings a *thermos of it* somewhere in their house???? Just damn well finish a cup and get another, if you need more that badly! It isn't a day trip to some sort of desert! Also I hope Patricia figured out that she needs to stop talking about rain. Mention that it has rained occasionally but drop the painstaking detail about it dripping on you or how it looks in the window.
— Aug 14, 2017 06:51PM
