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32 pages in and still on the first chapter, wow. Hits many of my pet peeves: parentheses; liberal use of adverbs; using anything other than "said" for dialogue; lengthy and heavy sentences with no purpose. Contemplating abandoning it now.
— Jul 13, 2017 07:53AM
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