Ron’s Reviews > Fifty Shades of Grey > Status Update

Ron
is 9% done
Wow, this is... interesting. The author's choice of words seems really arbitrary at times. Sometimes she'll invoke obscure words when simpler words will do, but she's also described someone's expression as "impassive" six times in the first three chapters.
— Jul 07, 2017 10:49PM
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Ron
is 61% done
Now that the book has settled in and the plot is moving along, it's not that bad. By the standards that I'd apply to romance (or "romance") novels, I'd say it's about average.
— Jul 22, 2017 02:23PM

Ron
is 27% done
Ana's about to read the contract. The author has her moments of grace, but they never last long. There's always some clumsy phrase, cliché, or product placement just around the corner.
— Jul 12, 2017 04:54PM