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Ally
is 92% done
...it's a sentence in a book careening without periods, gasping with too many commas, a sentence that, one begun, can't ever be stopped, a sentence doomed to loop back on itself to form a terrible black wheel...
[okay Captain Obvious, you *really* wanted to make sure everybody got the Correct Meaning of your Literary Device...]
— 7 hours, 10 min ago
[okay Captain Obvious, you *really* wanted to make sure everybody got the Correct Meaning of your Literary Device...]
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Ally
is 90% done
life doesn't beget life, it's death that begets death, so foundational a principle it has become civilization's engine, an inferno of grief that, not by screw, by rivet, is refashioned into outrage and hysteria and vengeance and moral polarity, a cycle perfected by the co-called war to end all wars, which... is really the war to begin all wars...
[I love the ecstatic tone here but the centrist moral vacuity sucks.]
— 17 hours, 28 min ago
[I love the ecstatic tone here but the centrist moral vacuity sucks.]
Ally
is 80% done
...he's worked with chickens before, and they happen to be Earth's bravest beasts...
[naw dude, chickens are demonspawn]
— 23 hours, 10 min ago
[naw dude, chickens are demonspawn]