chey’s Reviews > The River She Became > Status Update

we're getting somewhere!!!

we just went over her hair length and cut twice in the same five minutes. no one caught that repetition???

this is interesting so far but i'm running into the same issue i had with emily varga's last where the characters over explain everything again and again and seem to have no emotional depth despite their backstories 🥲 plz some development before the end i beg