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Amber
is on page 200 of 471
This reads very YA, which is an issue. I wish there was a bit more focused on the world building than perhaps some of the character interaction. This whole thing with Morgan should have been edited out. And Wynter, this already has enough going on with the subplots, we didn't need a poorly substantiated love triangle on top of it.
— Oct 04, 2026 11:00AM
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Amber
is on page 244 of 471
Oh right, the bounty...thanks for the reminder...I guess.
— 2 hours, 49 min ago
Amber
is on page 216 of 471
Yep, was right. That scene could have been done soooo much better or just skipped entirely. There was a myriad of ways to indicate that two of them were conspiring against the immortals without any of the rest of that that seemed way out of place for the Wraith.
— Oct 04, 2026 11:21AM
Amber
is on page 202 of 471
It's too bad I didn't read page 200 before the previous update. This should be a study session, she is behind and she's doing drinking games? This is supposed to be a bit more of a calculated character and she's not showing that at all here. This scene is going to be atrocious without me even finishing it.
— Oct 04, 2026 11:09AM