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I CAN'T BELIEVE IT. SHEHLLEH WAS THE SUPERNATURAL. kinda. no spoilers gang.

Priya was my favourite character followed closely by Mack, for everyone who cares.

gotta say i was confused at the sudden burst of stupidity. why would you consider levaing ur friend there? why would you not finish him off or at least have someone stay back and if he gets up again give him another head thump? how could you possibly believe he would stay down??? when do they ever stay down?

this guy isn't even a supernatural entity he's a fucking loser that has to drive a shitty truck every summer to get to the town LMAO. Legit does Halloween pranks.

and i get it. the guy is a metaphor for the patriarchy, sexual assault, and female oppression. The girls coming together as a group to defeat Jack is them defeating the hold every asshole male has on them. specially priya and shelley. SHELLLEYYY

i physically cannot be afraid of smiling jack. his vibes remind me of a crossover OC mix between eyeless jack, laughing jack, and jeff the killer. this is someones creepypasta fanfiction.
even when he's chasing Shelley, all i can think of is Randy from South Park shouting "SHELLLEYYYYYYY"

oop, another man who's a rapist,,, half of the friend group are victims. only the lesbian couple haven't been assaulted GO TEAM!

growing up with a creepypasta phase makes Smiling Jack intrinsically much less scary.

RAAAAAAAAAPE. RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPE. DRUNK, BLACKED OUT UNCONSCIOUS PEOPLE CAN'T CONSENT *JASE*. YOU WOULDN'T GIVE AN UNCONSCIOUS PERSON TEA *JASE*. WHY WOULD YOU KEEP GOING WHEN SHE PASSED OUT *JASE*. I HOPE YOU'RE SMILING JACK'S FIRST VICTIM *JASE*.

what the fuck kind of school takes their teenaged dumbass students to a creepy ass abandoned middle-of-nowhere mining town with abandoned shit and dangerous crap everywhere for a school camp. HUH?