Meishuu’s Reviews > Voidwalker > Status Update

Actual worldbuilding with potential, but this awful, awful prose it’s holding it back.

“Fi had started charging her own capsules at age twenty-five, after a bootleg one exploded and nearly took her eyebrows off. She spent too much time sculpting those eyebrow.”

Ficking marvel nonsense…

Yes, I get it, she’s quirky and millennial

“. Her mascara: knife-sharp against smoky eyeshadow. Her weapons: on bold display, the metal hilt of an energy sword at her belt”

Kill me. I miss the Siri book.