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this stupid girl she gets a random note and she decides to chase the messenger so cliche and does she really think anything will happen ts pmo

ok i’m not done yet but so far it’s reading super cliche. the young old relationship i can tell is gonna happen with grim, which mind u feels very forced. also istg if celeste ends up betraying her im gonna be so disappointed but literally not surprised at all. the writing isn’t bad but it’s nothing special. all i can say is it’s so basic and there’s nothing special about it.