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is 50% done
This is the most minor pet peeve of all time, but I hate when authors use figurative language to describe something that the characters would not actually know anything about. Like why is Collum using the metaphor of a volcano just before eruption if he’s never seen a volcano, much less an erupting volcano? Why are we using firearms in similes when this tale would have happened before their invention? Pisses me off
— Jul 10, 2026 07:00AM

