Laura’s Reviews > Pumpkin Spice and Everything Nice > Status Update
Laura
is 22% done
I'm not sure how I feel about the writing style. Dialogue is almost stilted or something. Do like Peter saying no to sex because he doesn't want a hookup, but an actual relationship.
— Apr 25, 2017 07:39AM
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Laura
is 35% done
Wait....did they even use a condom?? Sex scene was weird. Idk. Not as well written.
— Apr 25, 2017 08:37AM
Laura
is 32% done
I do find it interesting that Peter has never considered that Luke would take Jake if/when his sister passes away. But maybe one of those things he just refuses to consider cuz death is hard....
— Apr 25, 2017 08:24AM
